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雅思寫作考試第二部分為大作文,要求學生在40 分鐘內完成一篇字數Z少為250字的議論文寫作,對試卷提供的某些觀點進行討論,或者對某些社會現象問題進行分析。這個部分在整個寫作考試中占時Z久,評分所占比例Z大,是很多考生一直苦惱如何順利完成的部分,很多考生考前背誦了很多范文,卻還是覺得難以下手;就算努力拼湊完成后,也不盡符合雅思考官的評分要求造成得分不理想。甚至很多已經在校通過大學四,六級的學生也覺得以前很多非常“有用”的寫作套路,在這個部分也慘遭滑鐵盧。
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task and write at least 250 words. Some people believe that students who go directly from high school to university benefit less from their courses than those who take a job or travel in the “real world” before they enter the university. What is your opinion? (本文屬于教育類話題文章,在雅思考試中曾多次出現同話題文章,考生務必注意) 根據對題目的問話方式”what is your opinion?"的分析,本文屬于陳述個人觀點文章,重點在于提出個人觀點并對此進行支持論證。這種類型的文章,在雅思考試中占一半以上,考生在準備考試時應該給予一定的重視。 考題第一句話為背景介紹。考生應該快速畫出這句話中與論題(topic)相關的關鍵信息點(比如:who, what, where, when, why),并根據這些信息點進行對話題觀點作出思考(brainstorming)。可以寫出盡可能多的與這些關鍵字眼相關的其他的詞語或參考常見的觀點思考方向(比如:涉及人,可以考慮身體與精神方面),從而完成寫作前的準備工作。為了節省寫作時間和提高寫作質量,要求考生一定要在寫作前,根據觀點的思考,寫下提綱,中英文都可以。(這是根治寫作中常見的“意識流”問題Z好的方法。) 關鍵詞語選擇及擴展: Students: high school students, college/university students, high school graduates, pupil, freshman in a university, learner, etc. High school: secondary education, middle school, etc. University: college, higher education, further education, institution , etc. Before they enter the university: gap year, before college years, before getting enrolled in university, etc. Take a job: obtain working experience, get employment , work in a company, hand-on experience, etc. Course: subject, major, classroom learning, school life, academic learning, etc. 例文如下: Nowadays most students start their higher education immediately after their graduation from high school.(描述現狀,一部分學生情況)However, some people think that students shall benefit more from their courses if they work for some time to obtain some hand-on experience before they enter university.(轉述另一種學生情況)【以上兩句可以通過對題目背景句改寫完成】Personally , I think they are right.(論題句,交待個人觀點) 開頭段主要用于交代討論話題,表明作者觀點。建議考生Z好Z有效的方法就是開門見山,點到即可。具體的論述可以留在主體段擴展。注意,這段是考官必讀段,也是第一印象。第一印象有時就是Z后印象,所以一定注意這個段落的語言正確性。也可以適當注意語言的地道表達,建議準備一些比較好的表達觀點的地道的表達,比如名詞性從句,被動語態等(e.g. It is claimed that+觀點)。 由于篇幅有限,在本次文章中就先對此題如果開頭作了詳細的例證,那么如何發展和深入自己的觀點,將會在后面的文章中逐步展開。 |